Thursday, April 5, 2012

Post 02.5: Comic - Rough Script

Geno Drive – Page 1
Panel 1 - Spike and Fia are sky jumping out of their team’s airship
Spike: Alright! Let’s show those imperial screw-heads some steel!
Fia: Don’t get too reckless, we’re supposed to be taking out their new weapon, you know.

Panel 2 – Spike and Fia diving towards General Barx’s secret island base below
Spike: Relax Fia, I’m just [exited to fight some guys]. IT’s been ages since our last mission!
Fia: Mm-Hmm.

Panel 3 – Spike and Fia landing near a cliff edge.
Spike: Besides, this is General Barx we’re talking about here. Knowing him, chances are whatever weapon they’ve got has already blown up or derailed by now!
Fia: True, but with a GIGA High-General, you can never be too careful.

Geno Drive – Page 2
Panel 1 – Barx watching Spike and Fia running towards the base on a security screen.
Spike (On screen): Our partner Yukie has already infiltrated the base. Let’s rendezvous with her first!

Panel 2 – Barx sitting in his chair
Barx: So, those two brain-deads think they can win [against me] this time, hmm? We’ll see how well they [fight when…]
Marke (Off-panel): E-e-excuse me, sir…

Panel 3 – Barx turns to see his Leutenant Marke entering the room
Marke: Sir, we’ve recived reports that a pair of Surge agents has infiltrated the… oh. N-never mind then.
Barx: Ah, Marke! You’re just in time to witness my latest scientific creation!

Panel 4 – Barx holding Marke by the side. Barx starts going on about his newest weapon, while Marke looks on reluctantly.
Barx: (Speech bubble partially obscured by Marke’s) <Things about the weapon>
Marke: (Groan) Oh dear, not this again… I’m sorry sir, but you say these things every time, and…

Panel 5 – Barx is leading Marke through a door.
Barx: Nonsense! Come Marke, let me show you with your own eyes how fabulously foolproof this new machine truly is!
Marke: Foolproof maybe, but certainly not Barx-proof!

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